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betokid

Alberto C. Medina
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Lady in Red by betokid, literature

To all teenage dark poets by betokid, literature

To dream the impossible dream by betokid, literature

The darkness has come by betokid, literature

Journey of my fingertips by betokid, literature

And we kiss by betokid, literature

Ode to college by betokid, literature

Going back for more by betokid, literature

Love for a friend by betokid, literature

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Goodbye by betokid, literature

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Fantasy and reality by betokid, literature

Betrayed by your smile by betokid, literature

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Almost died by betokid, literature

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My Bio
Current Residence: New Haven, CT (Yale) by way of San Juan, PR
Favourite genre of music: Rock
Operating System: Windows XP
MP3 player of choice: The one inside Kazaa
Shell of choice: The ones the Ninja Turtles have
Wallpaper of choice: I use personal pics as wallpapers
Skin of choice: I like my own skin well enough. I think I'll keep it!
Favourite cartoon character: Batman and Spiderman and all them cats
Personal Quote: "Fuck quotes!"

Favourite Movies
Top Gun, Bad Boys, Contact, Lord of the Rings...
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
I don't follow bands, I follow songs.
Favourite Writers
Edgar Allan Poe, Gabriel García Márquez
Favourite Games
Too many to count
Favourite Gaming Platform
PC
Tools of the Trade
Paper, pencil, laptop and the imagination.
Other Interests
Reading, writing, baseball, chess, partying, chatting with friends, meeting new people
Title says it all, really. Just posted a new poem that I wrote in about 10 minutes and spent the next five minutes editing. It's an interesting new concept (to me, at least) and I really hope you'll all check it out and comment on it. In other news, back to college in three days. Can't wait...even though it does mean leaving someone special behind. But, life goes on...and death does too.
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*Walks in, head down, glancing about for any trace of a familiar face* Well, if there are still any of my few (4 or 5) but faithful followers around, this is comeback attempt #2 from me. With summer vacation coming to and end and looking ahead to sophomore year at college, I figured it's time to take writing a little seriously again, and I couldn't find a better place to share my work than here. So bear with me while I make myself get into one of those writing grooves again and submit all that pops out of my head for your consideration. For those of you who don't know me and somehow wound up here, suffice it to say that I'm just a 17 y/o Pu
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Once again, after abandoning DA for a few months, I've come back with a new submission and hopefully lots more to come soon. I spent a lot of time without writing but now I'm starting up again (I hope) so hopefully I'll be posting more stuff. So...hope you enjoy this new poem and hope to see all of you around my site soon...or else.
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Thanks for commenting man. Considering, you know quite a good deal about art, just dont actually do it like i do. Anyway, the support is much appreciated. Now get back to writting you lazy bum!
you are welcome for the comment ^.^ i love finding writers on this site. they make me feel less alone (seeing as how my writings get so little praise but shrug) :hug: agian
lol thanks for the comment. yes. i know the poem sucked. i never said it was the greatest in the world. i know i shoulda put something in the description. i'm sorry about not doing so. i know i spelt things wrong. i sometimes do it on purpose. other times, i jus dont care. but ne ways... if you knew me personally, you would know that i write a lot of different things, and some are jus... ok i'll say it myself, down right stupid and they should never be seen. lol but yeah. thanks for the comment anyways. it's jus a poem... dont worry. be happy :)
Ohhh thank you thank you thank you for your feedback on my unfinished, under contruction poem...much appreciated ;)
~Sarah
Thankies for your comment on my prose...you are right it did start out as a story and end in reflection ;)
:hug: thank you for the comments...i must now go rummage through your stuff and see what i like ^.^
thank you so much for commenting on my poem!!! i reallly appriciate it!!! :D yeh i tried to keep it simple, coz ive the feeling i was trying to capture, innocent love....

newais thankies again!! u rock!! :D